Of all the strips in this storyline, I suspect this is the weakest, but at least the dialogue is significantly better now than it was when I first wrote it.  (Sheepish grin.)  That's yet another of the advantages of working with a backlog: if I write or draw something that looks particularly stupid later, I usually have a month or two to rethink it, and -- if desired -- then change things.  Since I'm a multi-drafter who rarely gets things right the first time, that makes for a very good system for me.



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