This strip originally had fairly different dialogue, but when I was cleaning it up and typing in the text, I decided it needed rewriting. I did a lot of rewriting of dialogue in this particular storyline, actually, especially in the next few strips -- the dialogue was kind of dull in them originally, and I decided that wasn't going to cut it. Very occasionally I will let dull dialogue go by if I can't think of anything better, but I always try to improve it if I can. I hate bad writing, especially if it's my own.
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