Now, this strip is nothing like I originally wrote it -- it's probably the one that's most different, aside from the last panel, which is similar to its original wording. The strip was okay in my sketchbook, but after I rewrote the rest of the storyline, it didn't fit anymore, so I had to change everything. Of course, it wound up becoming much stronger because of that, so I don't regret it or anything. But boy, was it a pain in the neck to rewrite this entire strip!
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